As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Health is an essential thing that people have to sustain.

However in

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However, in

these days, the invention of

technology

such

as the

computer

and television has been influenced some people, especially in their healthy life. A lack of exercise is a detrimental effect of the innovation.

Although

the

technology

is appropriate to ease human activities, I utterly believe that sedentary activity

such

as watching

screen

can lead people to suffer

obesity

.

Technology

such

as

computer

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computers

the computer

and television give many benefits for humans.

Firstly

, people can know the information quickly by watching television since there are many channels that show about daily news either in the national area or in the worldwide.

Secondly

, the

computer

supports the inhabitants in working

such

as making all

kind

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kinds

of duty on it.

This

is due to the fact that most people tend to type in the

computer

rather than

hand-writing

something written by hand

handwriting

handwritten

.

Finally

,

screen

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the screen

and the

computer

may become essential equipment that people always used.

However

, as a matter of fact, many people can suffer

obesity

since they spend a long time watching the

screen

and utilizing

computer

while they

also

eat lots of diets. It can make people sitting whole day and inadvertently, they can suffer

obesity

since they forget to practice some exercises to make their body fit. Another disease that can occur is sightless since the layer of

screen

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the screen

and the

computer

can radiate the eyes of viewers.

Moreover

, the eyes will get tired easily and for a harmful case, it will be blindness for

human's eyes

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a human's eyes

.

As a result

, it is better to reduce the amount of time

that is

expended in using the

screen

and the

computer

. In conclusion,

although

the latest

technology

can helpful for

human's life

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the human's life

in certain activities, I believe that it will get risky for

people

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peoples'

peoples

health

such

as

obesity

and blindness. Where possible, health is a vital element of life, so respect it by avoiding using the

technology

in much time.