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The internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world. is all information reliable on the internet? what could be done to control information online?

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In the era of advanced technology, life becomes easier for individuals as they can receive all the required
information
 on the
internet
, and it is opportunistic for individuals.
However
, the main concern is whether the
information
 available is trustworthy or not. I think to get reliable
information
 online; strict action needs to be taken by the government. There are myriads of reasons behind the trust issue of the online
information
 available to the public. The main one is that students these days prefer to study online, and they use most of the
information
 from the
internet
 because of that some students score low grades in their assignments, and the reason behind
this
 is that the accessible
information
 is not right.
For instance
, all the universities in Australia, provides access to their students to their university online library, so that they can read right eBooks and don’t waste their time in reading the material which is not reliable and is easily approachable on the
internet
. In my view, to control
information
 online, higher authorities in the countries need to implement harsh plenties to the people, who is providing false
information
,
otherwise
,
this
 will be harmful to the readers. Before publishing anything on the
internet
, people need to seek permission from the government.
Moreover
, most of the online material, which is written by scholars are paid,
this
 needs to be free so that ordinary people can gain knowledge, and they will not use the other false
information
 available. To sum up, the
internet
 has revolutionised our lives by providing all the
information
 at one place, and it seems like a dependable source of
information
, but
this
 the duty of government to check the reliability of
information
 available and provide their citizens with the right
information
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repository
  • accessibility
  • credibility
  • regulation
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • biased reporting
  • public opinion
  • fact-checking
  • curate
  • digital literacy
  • discern
  • censorship
  • free speech
  • integrity
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