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Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it would cause problems for younger people. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #work #age
In today’s world where there is intense competition in almost every aspect of human lives, people tend to work round the clock irrespective of their
age
. In
this
 context, few demographics hold the belief that if population
after
Suggestion
over
 the
age
 of 60 work it might invite grave repercussion for youths, while others tend to have
different opinion
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a different opinion
different opinions
. I
also
 opine that people above the
age
 of 60, if continue their job, it might be problematic for adults. People of
age
 group 60 and above will have many life experiences, that will naturally assist to solve problems in offices.
Furthermore
, other team members will respect their decisions and value their ideas because of the seniority brought by their
age
.
This
 results in
minimal ego clash
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a minimal ego clash
the minimal ego clash
minimal ego clashes
 and effective teamwork.
Nonetheless
, if people persist in working even after the
age
 of 60, the chances of unemployment for youngsters will increase, as there will be lesser vacant positions in offices.
Furthermore
,
old
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older
 people are somewhat rigid in their decisions, so youths who tend to have creative ideas might not be able to share their views in meetings, as they feel their opinions are not going to be heard or taken seriously. All in all, if people are still working after the
age
 of 60, the chances of vacancy for young people will be less and they can get the feeling of being unwanted or unheard in
major company’s decision
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major company’s decisions
a major company’s decision
 which eventually will decrease their productivity.
Thus
, I totally agree with the statement that if people are allowed to work after 60 it would create problems to youths.
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