You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Iustina, Hoping you are doing well I am writing

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letter to you in order to assist you with some useful pieces of advice which helped me a lot when I got my driving licence.

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, it is pretty convenient to own a car and your personal driving licence.

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might help you to be always on time for each event you want to attend.

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, if you think you will go to study in another city, the skills of driving will literally make your life easier. It will be more convenient for you to drive than take a bus, which might be uncomfortable for daily circulation. So, I recommend you to try the school which I graduated from

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year.

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institution from Costesti provides practical lessons.

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, you can choose to have your personal trainer as I have done. Not many schools in our area have

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opportunity available.

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, it will make you feel more confident during driving and you will have good assistance every time you need it. Make sure that for the theoretical lessons you choose the offline course because it ends up earlier than the online one. Take care, Nikki

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task achievement

The letter provides good advice, but it could be enhanced by specifying the name of the recommended driving school and adding more detailed practical tips for learning how to drive. Expanding on these areas will help in achieving a more complete response.

coherence cohesion

Though the letter exhibits good logical structure, transitions between paragraphs can be smoother. Using transition phrases like 'Secondly' or 'Furthermore' between ideas will enhance coherence.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are both well-executed, setting a friendly and personal tone.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph conveys a single, clear idea, making it easy for the reader to follow the advice given.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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