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3D Electroporation Device using Microbeads Enhanced Electric Field for Bacterial Inactivation

#electroporation #device #microbeads #field #inactivation
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 paper presents the use of insulator-based dielectrophoresis (
iDEP
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)
device
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 comprising of densely packed silica beads that achieved high bacterial inactivation
performance
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 (~ 4.75 log removal). In the
device
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, insulating silica
microbeads
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 were packed between two mesh electrodes that enabled the enhancement of the local electric field strength allowing
electroporation
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 of bacterial cells. The inactivation
performance
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 of the
device
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 was evaluated using two model
bacteria including
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bacteria, including
 one Gram-positive bacterium (Enterococcus Faecalis) and one Gram-negative bacterium (Escherichia coli) under various applied voltages. More than 4.5 log removal of bacteria was obtained for the applied electric field strength of 2
kV
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KV
/cm at a
flowrate
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flow rate
 of 4
mL
a metric unit of volume equal to one thousandth of a liter
ml
/min. The effect of
microbeads
a minute life form (especially a disease-causing bacterium); the term is not in technical use
microbes
 on the inactivation
performance
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 was assessed by comparing the
performance
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 of the
microbead
of or involving or caused by or being microbes
microbial
device
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 with that of the
device
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 having no
microbeads
a minute life form (especially a disease-causing bacterium); the term is not in technical use
microbes
; operating under
same operating conditions
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the same operating conditions
. Results suggest that only 0.57 log removal was achieved for the
device
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 having no
microbeads
a minute life form (especially a disease-causing bacterium); the term is not in technical use
microbes
 which was 8 folds lower than the
device
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 with
microbeads
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.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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