Space travel has made Sometimes and people think that Space tourism will be probably developed in future? Do you think Space to travel would be a positive or negative development?
To begin
with
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with,
Space
travel will soon become the reality of life. people
will soon able
to see outer Add a missing verb
be able
space
more
closer Change the word
apply
from
the Change preposition
to
Space
shuttle. However
I was always interested in Add a comma
However,
Space
exploration. If I would have
the opportunity to go into Wrong verb form
had
the
outer Correct article usage
apply
space
I would definitely like to try on
. I think it is very interesting & challenging to go Correct pronoun usage
it on
in to
the Spaceship and Join the words
into
gathering
different Wrong verb form
gather
kind
of information Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
species
& probes. Many individual Change preposition
on species
people
think this
kind of experiment is a waste of time & money. Nevertheless
humankind Add a comma
Nevertheless,
are
always making one step forward towards Change the verb form
is
Space
communications. we need to know what is beyond our solar system. we need to know what is beyond our Universe. To sum
up
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up,
even
Tourism will Rephrase
apply
also
become one of the top most destination
in the world and it will Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
also
help Correct article usage
the Country
Country
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Country's
economies
. Another important Fix the agreement mistake
economy
aspects
of Replace the adjective
aspect
Space
is that Scientist
are always about to make new discoveries there. I think it is a great feeling to give Fix the agreement mistake
Scientists
people
more Opportunities, Knowledge and Experience. Scientist
often Fix the agreement mistake
Scientists
study
newChange the verb form
studies
Constulation
, when they launch the satellite from land and monitor them. When I was Correct your spelling
Constellation
child
I collected Add an article
a child
lot
of Stamps and postal Change the article
a lot
card
with SpaceshipFix the agreement mistake
cards
picture
. I dreamed that someday I be able to make a flight and see Fix the agreement mistake
pictures
the
outer Correct article usage
apply
space
in reality. Today my plans has
changed but my Change the verb form
have
dreams
to go into Fix the agreement mistake
dream
the
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apply
space
still remains same
and it will not Correct article usage
the same
vanished
. I believe in a few Change the verb form
vanish
years
time Change noun form
year's
years'
people
will able
to go to Add a missing verb
be able
Space
just like they go to museum
. Fix the agreement mistake
museums
To sum up
, I think Space
will give more self-realization and
more opportunities' to grow and more Correct word choice
apply
goal
to achieve.Fix the agreement mistake
goals
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
