Some people think that the media have to right to publish detail of people’s view, while other thinks it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

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There is a conflicting opinion about publication rights in the media industry. While some believe that they are entitled to publicise the people's viewpoint, others think that there should be restrictions on the level of what they can make known to the public. In
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with, it is often considered by some people that the media have a right to broadcast people's opinion because they have access to question people during or after an incident.
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simply means that the populace are updated on the thoughts of the populace on matters arising in the society, by relying on what they read either on newspaper, news or social media.
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, it would help broaden people's knowledge on issues as well as how to tackle it. To illustrate, in the recent salary negotiation between Nigeria Labour Congress and the government, civil servants aired their views during an interview with Channels representative and they were publicized. Contrary to
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, some people think that a limit should be made on what they make known to the populace. The reason is that it would prevent creating a negative impression about the
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since some opinions might be biased.
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, if it is a partial statement made due to political interest,
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it would help to avoid instilling wrong impression in the person's mind or even scaring foreign investors. In Nigeria,
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, during the Boko Haram insurgence, the media created did not create an impression that the whole
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was unsafe especially the Northern part of the
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of
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, so many multinational companies located in that part of the
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did not close down.
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, a limit to what should be publicized should be made. In conclusion,
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some people feel the media should broadcast people's view, there are people who think that
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information should be censored. Despite the fact that people could widen their knowledge through it, it could
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affect the economic level of the
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when it results to unemployed citizens.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Freedom of Expression
  • Public Interest
  • Misinformation
  • Manipulation
  • Invasion of Privacy
  • Sensitive Information
  • Social Harmony
  • Incite
  • Hatred
  • Accountability
  • Ethical Standards
  • Sensationalism
  • Regulation
  • Unrestricted
  • Public Panic
  • Well-rounded opinion
  • Disseminate
  • Extreme Views
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