You are planning a holiday in another country and would like a friend to accompany you. Write a letter to the friend asking him/her to join you and explain: invitation - Why are you taking a holiday? - What is your holiday plan? Explain, simples/ future - Why would you like him/her to go with you?

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Dear Linda, How

things

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going since our

last

meeting? I’m writing today to invite you to be my travel partner

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a journey through Brazil. After six long months of intensive construction

work days

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and winter coming, my boss has announced to us that the company will take a break during the whole month of

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. As I know

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long free time is a unique opportunity, I've decided to travel

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random destinations around Brazil. The journey will begin in Fortaleza, which I'll stay for two nights in an astonishing hostel.

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, I'm planning to ride a cheap car to start driving all over the Northeast coast of the country. The stops will include Natal, Recife, and the priceless city Maceio. The entire journey must

last

for fifteen days, finishing in Salvador, where I'll take a direct flight to Vancouver. Because you've once told

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me a huge fan of soccer as well as the mind weather of the place, I thought that would be a great idea

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you to go with me.

Besides

, you are

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a lovely person to be around; our

last

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together was memorable, and I'd love

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it again. I hope you can manage to come. Best wishes, Cibele

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

208 words

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