The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates how
children
travelled to school using different means of transport
system in the years 1990 and 2010.
Add an article
the transport
Overall
, most of the children
preferred walking while
going to school in 1990, while
most of the students used cars at the end
of the period. Walking, Cycling and using a school bus
the
major modes of transportation for earlier Add a missing verb
are the
children
. In contrast
, travelling by car had become more common for 2010 children
.
Walking is the primary source of transportation among students in 1990 with more that
10 Correct word choice
than
million
trips
during the year. Nonetheless
, it contributed to only 6 million
trips
in 2010. Bus
rides, cycling
contributed almost Correct word choice
and cycling
similarly
in 1990 with around 7 million
trips
. A mix of Walking and taking a bus
ride accounted for just under 6 million
trips
in 1990.
Car trips
increased by around 7 million
in 2010. In contrast
, walking trips
and a mix of walking and taking a bus
ride have reduced to half of their original value by the end of the period. Cycling trips
saw a drastic decline by
three times Change preposition
of
between
the years.Change preposition
over
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