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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teacher, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion

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As we may know, education takes very important part in our life. During the studying almost all of us had spent a lot of
time
 working on the homeworks.
Nevertheless
, some people think that it is a crucial part of learning, but others claim that it does not make any sense to bother school children with additional work. I believe that without
homework
 our education will be pointless. People who are saying that children do not need a
homework
 in schools have several reasons for it. The
first
 reason is that their children do not get enough
time
 for resting. Education in school takes too much
time
 from their lives and they do not want to spend even more there. The
second
 reason is that children ask their parents for help. So, most of the
time
 they do not complete anything that they are required to do with the
homework
. On another side, there are people who are trying to convince everyone in the world that
homework
 is important. They are saying that without it their children could not remember anything.
Homework
 helps to learn and remember new information. Very often children do not hear anything in classes, that leaves blank spaces in their knowledge. So doing the
homework
 is a
last
 chance to learn something new. Taking considerations from both sides, I would say that
homework
 in schools takes an important part in studying process. Children should definitely do it to learn something new. Without practising at home, you won't be able to be successful in your life.
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