Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

Humans as a species have multiple problems to cope with and if you drill it down everything will come down to overpopulation. Population,
sepcifically
in distinction from others
specifically
in major urban
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
like Mumbai, London, New York crosses its capacity and is a
problem
we are all trying to deal with.
This
essay discusses the causes and suggests
solution
Suggestion
a solution
solutions
to
this
problem
. Immigration from less-fortunate geographies
is
Suggestion
are
one of the major reasons behind
this
phenomena. People from smaller cities and villages do not have the facilities that we have in bigger cities.
For instance
, many small towns in India
does not have
Suggestion
do not have
electricity or a good
healthcare
Suggestion
health care
. People from these
places
Accept comma addition
places, hence
hence
flock to urban areas so that they could provide those for themselves and families. Another reason behind it is the fact that not a lot of low-wage people in an urban settlement are educated. Illiteracy prevents them from knowing the ill-effects of overpopulation.
For example
, there are people who think larger the family better, because that means more income.
However
, they forget that it
also
means more mouths to feed.
This
raises the number of people dramatically.
Solution
Suggestion
The solution
to
this
problem
lies in giving better employment opportunities, education and facilities across all types of places. Like Bhutan has tried to implement
this
in their country and
this
ensures that people are evenly distributed in all parts of the country. If we can do that, people will stop depending on these larger locations to have a decent life.
This
will solve the
problem
to a great extent To conclude,
this
problem
needs to be
adressed
(of mail) marked with a destination
addressed
to solve any other issue.
Crowd
Suggestion
The crowd
will keep coming in, leaving their homes if we do not provide them what they need right where they are. But how easy is to implement? I am not sure
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  • Urbanization
  • Migration
  • Sustainable development
  • Infrastructure
  • Population density
  • Urban sprawl
  • Urban planning
  • Renewable energy
  • Family planning
  • Rural economies
  • Public transport
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