Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch TV regularly both in school and at home? Do you agree or disagree?

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high technology era,
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as one of sophisticated technology can provide all information and knowledge that we need. People, especially children, are able to catch new knowledge without touching a lot of books and doing something else everywhere that provides
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. I totally support
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statement and bring my own reasons.
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of all,
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has many beneficial programs,
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as BBC and School TV, for children. So, when children do not have any activities, they must be better to watch
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than go somewhere and do something useless.
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, half of Indonesian children prefer to stay at home and watch
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after they get their selves at home because few
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programs have useful programs, like Laptop Si Unyil and Dunia Binatang. When children are staying at home and watching a helpful
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program, they are not wasting their time for nothing.
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, every year, all of technologies develop to be better than before.
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, the children will be encouraged to increase their knowledge in order to use their
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perfectly because they will not be able to utilize their televisions if they do not understand how to use it. In illustration, 2 decades ago, people did something hardly when they wanted to change a channel
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, but now we can change the channel by a controller.
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, most of
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programs show many useless programs that are not allowed to be watched by children. For illustration, sometimes we find an appearance which is vulgar and is only intended for adults.
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, the brightness of
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television
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the television
is not pretty good for children’s eyes, and most of children do not understand how to set it up. So, children will get damage to their eyes when they spend their time too long in front of
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. All
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all, there are many advantages and disadvantages
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. Parents only need to pay more
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attention
for their children whatever the children do.

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