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some people think that the government have the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others argue it is the responsibility of each individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #government #duty #citizens #diet #responsibility
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An often debated topic is whether the
government
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 should guarantee
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 safety for its people.
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 there are good reasons to support
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, I believe that individuals should be responsible for their meals. A healthy diet depends primarily on foods available in the market, and for
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 reason it would be necessary for the
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 to control
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 sources. Without governmental control, citizens would find it difficult to know which foods are safe for their meals. By imposing
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 laws, the
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 can limit the level of additives that
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 producers use, allowing consumers to eat healthily and reducing the risk of
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 poisoning.
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, when a person decides what to eat, they do so of their free will, and
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 should be respected. Some foods are known as unhealthy, but only when people consume them excessively or frequently.
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, the consequences of the intake of fast
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 are not worth mentioning if we do not eat it regularly. Any involvement of the
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 with the daily choices would merely restrict the options we have.
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, some people have an allergy to a particular type of
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foods, although
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 it is generally healthy to others. It is unjustified for the
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 to restrict the consumption of mushrooms just because a few people cannot eat them. From
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 view, I feel that each person should be responsible for what they eat rather than relying on any policy
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 the
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 on
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 choices. In conclusion, it seems to me that people should bear the responsibility for a healthy diet despite undeniable advantages of governmental control over
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 choices.
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