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Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper any more. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#people #newspaper
With the increasing popularity of new age / electronic media, traditional newspapers seem less appealing and unnecessary to many people. I believe that
this
 trend is inevitable;
however
, it does not mean that
print
 media has become redundant. As technology has developed at an astounding pace, a considerable number of people have gadgets,
such
 as mobile phones and the computers, which allow them to find
information
 at any time, so
fewer
Suggestion
few
 people read
print
 newspapers today. If they want to check what is happening around the world, what they need to do is to just press some buttons on their screen.
This
 way of accessing news has many advantages over reading
print
 newspapers in terms of time efficiency and convenience, and
that is
 why most modern people are no longer big fans of
print
 newspapers. Another reason why
print
 newspapers are no longer needed is that their presentation of
information
 is monotonous while the various functions of the digital news are more engaging and personalized. The discussion board of news online provides viewers with opportunities to exchange their ideas about how they perceive the news events; with notifications of digital news, subscribers can be well informed of the most updated
information
, so they will not miss any important news reports. All these features cannot be found in
print
 newspapers because they just display
information
 with texts and photographs.
On the other hand
, reading newspapers in a traditional way may be preferred by some people, as
print
 newspapers are more authoritative in terms of the authenticity of
information
. To publish an issue of
newspaper
Suggestion
the newspaper
a newspaper
, it involves a series of processes
such
 as journalists collecting
information
 on spot and editors proofreading reports multiple times. These vigorous steps greatly ensure the reliability of news.
By contrast
, much of online news is not true because each internet user is able to publish news and make it go it go viral. Readers of
this
 kind of fault
information
 will be misled. In conclusion,
print
 newspapers are still needed because of their inherent merits that online media lack. They are a reliable source of news and
information
. They may lack the versatility of online
media but
Accept comma addition
media, but
 that does not mean that they are not needed.
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