Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists including painters, musicians and poets, etc. However, other people think that is a waste of money.

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– music, paintings, calligraphy, pictures, sculpture, poems and dance. There are some who claim that it is important to support the

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and others who are opposed to

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funding. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss both sides of the argument and

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give my opinion. There are many reasons why

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. The contributions of

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to the society are

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essential.

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can bring out people’s creativity, views and personalities.

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, we learn about our history, traditions and culture through movies, songs and paintings made by

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are the media of diffusing tradition. All kinds of

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are the basis of a

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without which the

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can’t be civilised. So

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are the ambassadors of culture and play a vital role in elevating the level of civilization of the

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. It is a major form of cultural abundance. Another important aspect of

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is an ancient means of communication. Our language is a result of people’s need to communicate.

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is what differentiates us from animals.

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is our soul and it is a source of courage.

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entertain us.

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because earning a livelihood from

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is difficult

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in the budding stages. Opponents of

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say that

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spent on the arts could have been used for considerably more vital purposes. They have strong reasons as a nation’s health and wellbeing should be paramount. The idea that elderly people are forced to wait for essential operations whilst the

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required to increase available medical provision is spent on opera and ballet is plainly immoral. There are

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more deserving social causes for the

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that should be considered before the arts. Homelessness, unemployment, illiteracy – all of these deserve to be addressed before

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is spent on what is essentially little more than entertainment. To summarise, I would like to say that as both sides have strong arguments, it depends on the condition of the

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. In developed countries where even the poorest of the poor have all the basic amenities of life,

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but in countries where people are dying of starvation and diseases, other matters should be given priority.