Students should not be allowed to use mobile phones at school. Do you agree or disagree with this view

It is true that using technological developments

such

as mobile phones has become increasingly common among people these days . Some people argue that using

this

gadget should be banned at school . In my opinion , I completely agree with

this

view and believe that using smartphones

while

studying can engender several obvious harmful consequences to students.

Firstly

, the excessive usage of

this

technological device tends to decrease the opportunities for social interaction and physical activities during recess and

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. When scholars have some free time , they tend to entertain themselves with smartphones which provide many ways of amusement

such

as chatting with friends or playing video games and

then

they will be more isolated and introverted .

Also

, rather than engaging in leisure activities at schools

such

as

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or

music

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they will prefer to spend their free time only on

this

device .

Thus

, it would be better for them to not use

this

development at school.

Secondly

, using phones in the classroom can affect negatively the performance of scholars .

In other words

, children are not mature enough to use

this

device to help them in their studies so they spend time using social media or texting friends rather than focusing on courses and with the teacher .

As a result

, their concentration in the classroom decreases and they become less focused on what the teacher explains . All these reasons may lead to a decline in their achievement .

For example

, many researchers demonstrate that the removal of phones from classrooms can lead to an improvement in student grades .

That is

why

this

gadget should not be allowed to children

while

studying . In conclusion , despite

that smartphones

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can be helpful for children in some cases , I strongly believe that the excessive usage of

this gadget

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at school remains an unfavourable habit because it tends to decrease social interaction and physical activities and reduce

students

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achievement .