Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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, people have different viewpoints towards whether the

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should invest

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raising citizens’ awareness of healthy living or allocate health funds for

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unwell. From my perspective, I strongly agree that the

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should devote their

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and time to promoting healthy lifestyles rather than squander

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on those who are suffering from terminal illness. To lead people to live a healthy lifestyle is a huge challenge for many primary care practices. In the rural areas, many people fall prey to easily avoidable diseases mainly because they are not aware about how to prevent them.

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, enlightening people about a healthy lifestyle can remove the existence of many diseases from the roots.

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, ‘polio vaccine campaign’ has been conducted extensively, with the help of mainstream media as well.

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, as of today, India is a completely polio-free country. If the clinicians of medical centres are encouraged to use educational tools to emphasize personal fitness levels and to promote fitness as the “treatment of choice” for all patients, the proportion of the sick people can be greatly reduced. There is no doubt that there will always be a certain number of people who are ill and in need of treatment simply because they cannot afford it. The governments do have a certain fund for the fulfilment of

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need, but practically

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shall put an unnecessary deficit in the

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that could be used elsewhere.

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is because the cost of treating any disease will always be more than the

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spent on preventing it.

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, logically, the

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can be accountable for the state of health of its citizens, but it cannot be held accountable for the diseases sustained by its people. In conclusion, I’d agree more with the idea of the

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spending a part of nation budget on promoting a healthy lifestyle.