The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
The table illustrates
reasons
about
why UK Change preposition
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people
travelled to different places between the years 1994 and 1998. The second
chart gives information about where they have travelled.
Overall
, most of
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the
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travellers
visited western Europe, while
very few people
travelled to North America and other areas. Holiday
is the prime reason why Add an article
The holiday
A holiday
people
have travelled abroad.
In 1994, 22072 people
visited foreign nation
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nations
in
which three-quarters accounted for holiday Change preposition
of
reason
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reasons
travellers
and visits to friends and relatives are followed by holiday travellers
, which accounted for 3155 and 2689 travellers
respectively. Despite falling to 21610 total travellers
in 1995, the figure increased considerably till the end of the period. Furthermore
, travellers
accounted for remaining
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the remaining
reasons
except for other reasons
almost followed the same pattern as the total travellers
figure. Change to a genitive case
traveller's
travellers'
Finally
, people
travelling for other reasons
have
increased from 896 in 1995 to 1054 in 1997, before falling to 990 in 1998.
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In addition
to this
, Western Europe hosted most of the travellers
from the UK in all the years with almost 90% of total people
. In contrast
, other areas and North America hosted the remaining 10% of people
with almost below 2500 people
combined in all the years.Submitted by Goutham on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words reasons, people, travellers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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