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The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.

The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
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The table illustrates
reasons
about
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why UK
people
 travelled to different places between the years 1994 and 1998. The
second
 chart gives information about where they have travelled.
Overall
, most
of
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the
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UK
travellers
 visited western Europe,
while
 very few
people
 travelled to North America and other areas.
Holiday
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The holiday
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 is the prime reason why
people
 have travelled abroad. In 1994, 22072
people
 visited foreign
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nations
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in
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 which three-quarters accounted for holiday
reason
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. Business
travellers
 and visits to friends and relatives are followed by holiday
travellers
, which accounted for 3155 and 2689
travellers
 respectively. Despite falling to 21610 total
travellers
 in 1995, the figure increased considerably till the end of the period.
Furthermore
,
travellers
 accounted for
remaining
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reasons
 except for other
reasons
 almost followed the same pattern as the total
travellers
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 figure.
Finally
,
people
 travelling for other
reasons
have
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increased from 896 in 1995 to 1054 in 1997, before falling to 990 in 1998.
In addition
 to
this
, Western Europe hosted most of the
travellers
 from the UK in all the years with almost 90% of total
people
.
In contrast
, other areas and North America hosted the remaining 10% of
people
 with almost below 2500
people
 combined in all the years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words reasons, people, travellers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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