On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to insurance
company manager that I have recently lost my mobile phone during my holiday in Doha and Correct article usage
the insurance
this
item is insured.
Firstly
, it was an Apple iPhone 15 pro max which cost me approximately 1,399 dollars. Then
, It was black and has
the logo of Wrong verb form
had
"Muborak
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If we come to the loss of the phone Correct article usage
the "Muborak
that
I was on a holiday trip to Doha city between 10 March to 20 March 2023. I was on Katara Beach on 12 March when I lost my phone in the sand. After that, I searched for it for a long time but could not find it.
To resolve the problem, I would appreciate it if you could cover the item’s cost. Because I got it recently.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
SamandarCorrect pronoun usage
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Coherence & Cohesion
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Task Achievement
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General
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Tone
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