In newspaper, local hospital advertised for people to do unpaid work in the hospital Write a letter Why do you want to do unpaid work Which kind of work do you want When you can join the hospital
Dear sir,
I am Irfan Ali, living in Kuwait hostel which is located near THE Star market, and I am writing
this
in connection with your advertisement in the Dawn on the last
Sunday in which volunteering people
were asked to apply.
First
, since I have done diploma in public medical, I want to gain some experience in THE medical field, therefore
, I wish to do unpaid work in your hospital. Additionally
, I love to help people
, particularly older people
. When I serve them, I feel excited because service
of humanity is a big cause of my life. Correct article usage
the service
For example
, I spent 3-4 hours on a weekly basis to help mankind.
Second
, I can take care of patients and spend time with them. The older
Correct article usage
Older
people
need more care and attention. Also
, if I am given the task of data entry at the reception, I will be able to do my best because I am good at Add an article
the computer
a computer
computer
while my typing speed is Fix the agreement mistake
computers
also
excellent.
Third
, Since I am right now in Karachi for the seminar which will end on the 19th, I will be available for the work from the 24th of this
month.
Waiting eagerly to join your hospital
Yours faithfully
Irfan AliSubmitted by naziya.bustani on
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