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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Language
 bridges individual across the globe. Annually, several languages are eliminated in
this
 modern society. Some sociology experts believe that people can live easily if they can communicate clearly with other nationalities. They suggest that few languages must be studied,
however
, I do not agree with
this
 belief because other languages contribute to the ancient culture and civilisation. We can never deny others, who believe that studying several languages are stressful and difficult.
For example
, understanding Nihonggo requires intensive study of words and idioms.
In addition
, their structure in writing is different from other countries.
As a result
, it becomes a burden on other people to study the
language
 they are not used to.
Moreover
, they become exhausted and confused if they are not familiar with the country’s culture. According to others, studying single
language
 removes communication barriers across the world. As an example, using English as a capital
language
 unites a majority of people around the world. People using
this
language
 can easily understand each other because it is normally taught in school. If people u
ses
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use
are using
single
l
anguage
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language, then
then
 the communication will not b
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
a problem.
However
, in other parts of the country,
language
 is considered part of their culture. As an example, civilisation in Egypt is born because of
language
 and communication. More so Spain has one
language
 because it resembles their identity and pride.
Language
 cannot be easily taken from other countries because of its historical significance. People should not be encapsulated in a limited
language
. To conclude, other people consider studying fewer languages as the uncomplicated task;
h
owever certain
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however, certain
languages resemble historical value and should be given importance.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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