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Some scientists think that there are intelligent forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Our human race has found the answer for a lot of questions with the help of science, but still there are lots of unanswered questions, even with the feet of
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 we achieved so far we try to look for intelligent life form in any planet or stars or even the moons of the plants in our solar systems for different scientific reasons lets focus on the contradictions involve in
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 there are evidence found in the nearby planets which leads to doubt that there could be another life form living in the shadows in seclusion
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 to that some rocks are damaged in the nearby planets using machinery which proves that we humans neither found the
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 to drill the rocks in the nearby planets nor the resources
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 raises the answer to the questions that aliens exist and they are not in our reach they hide and they possess some advanced
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 to move to another planet if we humans establish contacts we could utilize the science behind their
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 to resolve problems we have on earth.
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 there are experts who strictly suggest that establishing contact with another intelligent life form will not be a best option because we humans aren’t prepared enough to face the consequences if the contact goes wrong we simply don’t possess the
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 handle the adversary what if the aliens have a motive to invade our planet we may be inviting the danger to our door step "curiosity killed the cat"
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 we don’t know much about their
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 we just found footages of the aftermath destruction of the uninhabited planets they are experimenting what if our earth falls in the crossfire of their experiment, anything could happen. Summing up all the events under discussion its best to remain progressing on studying the things around us in
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 for providing solutions to our earthly problems on our own that may be the best option to stick to the survival of our race we can’t expect aliens to be humans.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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