Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others,however,believe that boys and girls benefit more attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people said that student can receive more benefits by learning in mixed schools.
On the other
hand some
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hand, some
people believe that student can get more improvement of their life by studying in separate schools for girls and boys.
However
,
this
argumentary
topic will discuss as follows. To start with, we can view
many advantages
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the many advantages
of students which are learning in
mixed
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a mixed school
mixed schools
school
.
Firstly
, they can understand thinking way of their changes in
opposite gender
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the opposite gender
.
As a result
of that they have ability to deal with
opposite gender
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the opposite gender
without any issues. For instant of that,
student
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the student
perform
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performs
socities
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
societies
together successfully. For more over
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,
according to the way of society
,
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,
some subjects like agriculture and home science are specialized to girls or boys. But in mixed
school both
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school, both
sex can learn that subject without argument.
Although
they can build up their personality by developing their life with balanced mentally and physically. In brief, we can have more benefits from mixed schools rather than separate schools.
However
,
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educate in mixed
school
have not
only benefits
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the only benefits
.
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.
But
also
drawbacks are there.
main disadvantage
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The main disadvantage
Main disadvantage
is subject engaging relationship with
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
.
For
example they
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example, they
choose
boyfriend
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a boyfriend
in classroom
furthermore
, some students
truent
absent without permission
truant
from the
school
. After
analiying
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
all above argument
,
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we can conclude educate boys and girls can get more merits from attending by mixed schools rather than separate schools.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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