Ordinary people try to copy famous personalities by seeing them on TV or reading about them in the newspapers.Why do they do this?Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people?

In
this
era television and newspaper have a great influence on common people's life. Ordinary people always try to copy eminent personalities when they are appearing on TV or magazines. I strongly believe it is not all appreciable
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Accept space
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In
this
essay we will scrutinize why the normal people imitate famous persons and
also
analyse why it is not a good practice.
To begin
, Famous personalities are always present in different TV shows or newspapers. The Common people, especially, teenagers always try to mirror famous personalities because of two main reasons.
Firstly
Young people believe that if they emulate the eminent personalities, particularly, film stars they will become more popular in a short time span.
For instance
, a majority of youngsters in India follow some film stars or sports persons.
In addition
, another group people argues that, mirroring eminent personality’s behaviour will
gave
Suggestion
give
success in their life. Because of these irrelevant thoughts most of the young people try to follow the famous personality’s life style.
Conversely
, excessive copying tendency will result high physical and mental health related problems. A recent survey, conducted in India reveals that, in 2015 30 % of teenage girls undergo different kind of cosmic surgeries. These surgeries adversely affect their physical health
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In addition
, high, mirroring behaviour sometimes leads to poor school attendance and will result in bad academic performance which
further
affects their mental health To recapitulate, it is better to believe yourself for success rather than copying other’s behaviour.TV and newspapers are projecting only positive side of the success and always try to hide the bad side from the public.

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