Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
When discussing the advantages and disadvantages of having many toys for children to play, one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue. Some people think that having many toys is good,
becuase
it develops the for the reason that; on account of
because
tectile
skills of the of or pertaining to tactic or tactics
tactical
child
. Others believe that having too many toys have grave environemtal
consequences and should be prevented. In the following essay, I will provide arguments and examples to support my assumption.
The main advantage in exposing children to a large number of toys is that it improves the of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
child
's motor abilities. When a child
touches a new toy, he familiarize
himself with new textures and sizes, Suggestion
familiarizes
such
as the wheels of a toy car, the hair of a doll or Leggo parts. This
exposure leads
to higher Suggestion
lead
tectile
abilities, and a better use of fine motor skills. of or relating to or proceeding from the sense of touch
tactile
tactical
For example
, A child
who has a large number of toys, will know from an early age the location of the wheels and their circular movement. As a result
, he will be able to locate the position of the wheels faster when building a Leggo
car.
Unfortunately, the main above average in size or number or quantity or magnitude or extent
large
disadvatage
in buying children a large number of toys is the environmental damage associated with it. Currently, many toys are built from the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantage
undegradable
materials, such
as plastic and rubber, which incraese
the amount of pollution. As we buy more and more toys, we contribute to become bigger or greater in amount
increase
increases
increased
this
increaseing
problem, which becoming greater or larger
increasing
effect
our the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affect
surroundig
. According to the New York Times, closely encircling
surrounding
for example
, 25 tons of unused toys are thrown yearly in the UK. This
demonstrates that there are grave consquences
of buying many toys.
In conclusion, having many toys a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
consequence
have
Suggestion
has
advatages
, the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
such
as improving our child
's development, as well as disadvatages
, like increasing pollution. We should find the correct balance in order to help our children and planet.the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
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