Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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When discussing the advantages and disadvantages of having many toys for children to play, one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue. Some people think that having many toys is good,
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
it develops the
tectile
of or pertaining to tactic or tactics
tactical
skills of the
child
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. Others believe that having too many toys have grave
environemtal
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
consequences and should be prevented. In the following essay, I will provide arguments and examples to support my assumption. The main advantage in exposing children to a large number of toys is that it improves the
child
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's motor abilities. When a
child
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touches a new toy, he
familiarize
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familiarizes
himself with new textures and sizes,
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as the wheels of a toy car, the hair of a doll or Leggo parts.
This
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exposure
leads
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lead
to higher
tectile
of or relating to or proceeding from the sense of touch
tactile
tactical
abilities, and a better use of fine motor skills.
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, A
child
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who has a large number of toys, will know from an early age the location of the wheels and their circular movement.
As a result
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, he will be able to locate the position of the wheels faster when building a
Leggo
above average in size or number or quantity or magnitude or extent
large
car. Unfortunately, the main
disadvatage
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantage
in buying children a large number of toys is the environmental damage associated with it. Currently, many toys are built from
undegradable
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materials,
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as plastic and rubber, which
incraese
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
increases
increased
the amount of pollution. As we buy more and more toys, we contribute to
this
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increaseing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
problem, which
effect
the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affect
our
surroundig
closely encircling
surrounding
. According to the New York Times,
for example
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, 25 tons of unused toys are thrown yearly in the UK.
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demonstrates that there are grave
consquences
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
consequence
of buying many toys. In conclusion, having many toys
have
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has
advatages
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
,
such
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as improving our
child
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's development, as well as
disadvatages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
, like increasing pollution. We should find the correct balance in order to help our children and planet.

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