Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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The world has become a global village since people are able to purchase
same goods
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the same goods
from any market they want. I think
this
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process has two main advantages for the human being: competition and diversity. One of the most important advantages of being able to buy
same commodities
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the same commodities
is its bringing about commercial competition between countries. Sometimes when a developing
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country purchase a
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country to purchase a
product from a developed
country
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, experts in the related
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them, grasp the production method, technique or system, and begin to imitate them. If the government decides to make them in the factories and continue producing, that developing
country
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may reach to a high level, and even become one of the main rivals of any developed
country
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conducting activity in the same industrial sector. To illustrate, after copying the washing machines imported from various Western countries, including America, Germany, and France; China managed to make advanced washing machines, and as these machines became so preferable in the world market that Western countries felt necessary to add new functions to their outputs, and reduce their prices to attract customers.
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process shows that globalization of the market harbours a rivalry between countries that leads to advanced technology and cheap products. Another advantage is diversity of output labels because it gives people opportunity to save money. Any
country
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buys
same kind
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the same kind
of products,
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as milk, cheese and butter, from
foreign state
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foreign states
a foreign state
or private companies under different names, so consumers find the chance to make a choice between the best and the worst, or the high-priced and
the low
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lower
the lowest
-priced, and spend less money.
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, the variety
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of
products may render it possible to make
profit
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a profit
in some professions.
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, a technician who repairs refrigerators in Cyprus prefers the Indian compressor to the French one because the former is less expensive than the latter, so he can earn more money by fixing the Indian one to the broken fridge.
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, by having access to same items or same type of items under different labels, people can make considerable savings in their costs, and develop their jobs into more profitable ones. In conclusion, providing same commodities in any place of the world generates a commercial competition that results in developed technology and less costly products, and diversity in labels of items that decreases the
spends
a native or inhabitant of Spain
Spaniards
spindles
and increases the personal gain.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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