Some people believe that it is good to share as muh information as possible in scientific research, business and the aademic world. Others believe that some information is too much important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both view and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write atleast 250 words.

Sharing information
a
to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
much as possible among scientific researchers, businessmen and academicians, is believed by some to be beneficial to the people involved;
however
, others disagree that not all data should be distributed without
renumeration
something that remunerates
remuneration
. I concur with the latter and both views will be discussed in
this
essay.
To begin
with, data sharing should be encouraged because it leads to
ground breaking
being or producing something like nothing done or experienced or created before
groundbreaking
discoveries, profound creativity and productivity of a particular field of knowledge.
For example
, if the medical scientists, drafted from all over the world, had not given out their individual ideas to the creation of the newly discovered Ebila vaccine, the death rate and predicted prevalence rate of the disease, may be the increase in
the neareat
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the near
the nearest
future.
This
may be not be possible if each of these esteemed individuals kept back their contribution.
However
, the synergy between the profession may be counterproductive if one of
parties
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the parties
involved is insincere;
consequently
, the relationship becomes
parasiticas
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parasitic as
one eventually gains more than the other.
For instance
, a businessman, who has shared some unimportant information about his product, gets more from his colleague that gave out the crucial part of his;
as a result
, his profits and sales may eventually double that of his victim because of the unfair deal. Having described both views, I am of the opinion that
exchange
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the exchange
of ideas is beneficial overall;
nonetheless
,
such
agreements must have a legal backing
such
that defaulters will face a legal punishment if found guilty. To illustrate, a university should be
fined
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fine
for a huge amount of money if an
agreeement
the statement (oral or written) of an exchange of promises
agreement
to exchange new teaching techniques and equipment
(
Accept space
(
for better training of students) is not done
as signed
appointed to a post or duty
assigned
in a legal document. In conclusion, it i
s essential
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essential
ly to share ideas among researchers, businesses and in th
e education
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education
al section, but
this
should be done legally to avoid being disadvantaged
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