Parents should spend more time with their children helping then with their homework Do you agree or disagree?
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career
in every field of life. Guardians spent more and more time
with their children helping
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then
to with their homework
task. Some people thing
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think
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essay I will discuss in favour of spend of
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this
topic
Firstly
, parents are
more curious about their children now a day, they are trying to pay more Suggestion
is
attention
on
their children. For that purpose they spend more Suggestion
to
time
with their children to help then
with their objective case of they
them
than
than than
homework
. This
is the great thing, because children are very innocent they
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innocent, they
parents
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parents'
attention
they may do
some mistakes in their educational engage in
make
career
field, moreover
without parent’s attention
they cannot play good role in education. If parents did not help them, they will continuously repeating
their mistakes, Suggestion
repeat
finally
this
will cause more dangerous for their career
.
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instance one
of my friend son, he has very bad Accept comma addition
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hand writing
, now he is very something written by hand
handwriting
young but
still he is not able to write correctly, Accept comma addition
young, but
this
is because my friend has not enough time
to spend with their child
, resultingly
now their child
cannot improve their bad habit.
Secondly
, if parents did not pay attention
on
their children, children cannot play Suggestion
to
vital role
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a vital role
class room
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the classroom
classroom
a classroom
classrooms
this
lead to the children lack of confidence feelings. This
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thing, especially
time
when children are preparing them self for future
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future careers
career
. Home work is the practice for child
, to utilize their knowledge what he Suggestion
children
the child
a child
learn
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learns
class
and implement this
again. If child
will not be able to do Suggestion
the child
a child
this
correctly, this
will cause children embarrassment in class
that is
very negative affect
for a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
child
. To overcome Suggestion
the child
children
this
issue guardians are the responsible
to play their role at home and spend more Suggestion
responsibility
time
special for education counselling.
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instance my
neighbourhood friend’s Accept comma addition
instance, my
child
always get
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always gets
first
position in class
. Because their parents pay more attention
on this
homework
and studies.
To summarise, children getting more attention
of their parents special in homework
task. To improve children performance
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a child's performance
child's performance
the child's performance
children's performance
this
is very necessary, definitely with the improvement of performance children confidence and personality will also
increase.Submitted by muhammadbilalhsp on
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