More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Do you agree or disagree?

The number of individuals moving from their undeveloped homelands to developed countries in order to start a job within specialized industries
such
as engineering, computing, and medicine is on a rise. Some argue that
this
trend is affecting negatively the poorer countries, while others believe it is a normal step.
This
essay agrees that moving out is rather beneficial and natural, where it will
firstly
discuss the benefits to the economy and
secondly
the positive impact of the international experience on the locals.
To begin
with, qualified individuals migrating their
home
for job vacancies from their
home
country
have a positive impact on the economy of the undeveloped countries.
In other words
, several jobs in different sectors in a poor
country
do not afford a high number of people demanding a vacancy. While some leave the
country
, the competition is less, resulting in a decrease rate of unemployment.
As a result
, the standard of life will improve.
For example
, half of computer science graduates from India are currently working in the IT sector in Canada due to her shortage of Canadian skills.
Moreover
, expats returning to their
home
will
also
carry with them the high quality experiences hey gained abroad. To put it differently, most immigrants tend to come back
home
to
settle
a major port of entry and the largest city in Washington; located in west central Washington on the protected waters of Puget Sound with the snow-capped peaks of the Cascade Range and Mount Ranier visible to the south and east; an aerospace and computer center; site of the University of Washington
Seattle
, where they will be part of their
country
's workforce implementing the international experience.
Consequently
, the knowledge of the locals will expand and it will be represented in the productivity. The link between Lebanon and the medical sector is a prime example of how Lebanese doctors implement advanced surgery procedures they learned abroad in Lebanon. In conclusion, the movement of qualified people should be encouraged because it is not only advantageous for the local
country
's economy, but
also
the knowledge will spread among the locals.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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