Some people say that when deciding how taxes should be spent, governments should prioritise health care. Other people believe that there are more important priorities for taxpayers' money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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contemporary world, every working person according to their income pay tax to law enforcement agency which they use for development of people. A section of society thinks that

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should spend their budget mainly on

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the latter notion

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good, then

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they are able to denote their time more on work which increase their productivity as well as salary

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development of

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the country

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some factors on which

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should look after because these

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factors all contribute to

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the growth

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law enforcement agency should prioritise all the factor while making

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People gave them taxes because they want to gain all the

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benefits

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an important factor

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should not ignore the other one. Taxpayer gave their taxes for utilizing it for the growth of

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It can only be done if

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should prioritise each and everything according to its need.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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262 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

1. Fundamental need
2. Economic growth and development
3. Workforce productivity
4. Preventive health care
5. Cost-effective
6. Long-term outcomes
7. Health disparities
8. Social equity
9. Socioeconomic status
10. Vulnerable populations
11. Infrastructure
12. Quality of life
13. Knowledgeable workforce
14. Economic propellers
15. Balanced approach
16. Diverse allocation
17. Societal development
18. Robust economic performance
19. Public funds
20. Health system burden

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