Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #scale

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Accept space

Girish Akula,

here by

(formal) by means of this

hereby

submit my application for student visa to pursue my academic

career

Use synonyms

in the field of MBA in Hospitality and Tourism by completing Under Graduation in Bachelor of Hotel Management at Acharya Nagarjuna University

Accept space

The achievement of my graduation in hotel management with the better grades has given me new hope to pursue my

further

Linking Words

education

Use synonyms

. After updating the

knowledge

Use synonyms

of management in India, I aspire to experience the

education

Use synonyms

United Kingdom

Suggestion

the United Kingdom

which is one of the renowned

Use synonyms

education

Suggestion

educational

systems in the

world

Use synonyms

. The program selected by me is Hospitality and Tourism can prove and secure my goal of

further

Linking Words

education

Use synonyms

. It can

also

Linking Words

be as one of

the good

Suggestion

the best

platforms for me to secure my

career

Use synonyms

as an

Accept space

My fascination with Hospitality and Tourism started when I entered into adolescent age

Accept space

and

that is

Linking Words

the time when I

first

Linking Words

visited to Goa (city of Pearl orient)

Accept space

where hordes of tourists visit to see monumental places. I was amazed to see

plethora

Suggestion

a plethora

the plethora

of tourist guides and their compensation given by tourists

Accept space

And

also

Linking Words

the hotel staff which I stayed in welcome the tourists with a good hospitality and the way they treated the tourists attracted me a lot

Accept space

also

Linking Words

liked the way of explaining to the tourists about the great histories of Goa and monumental structures.

Moreover

Linking Words

Accept space

tourist guides should roam the whole city with the tourists

inorder

Suggestion

in order

expain

make plain and comprehensible

explain

expand

them and

also

Linking Words

a tourist guide must have

knowledge

Use synonyms

of the place and their history. The curiosity of mine in

tourisim program

Suggestion

a tourism program

tourism program

the tourism program

surged a lot. After returning from Goa I got raised by a thought why don't I choose my

career

Use synonyms

in the industry of tourism. Which makes me to interact with new people from different countries and cultures on which I am always excited about. I decided to take Hotel Management after completion of my higher secondary schooling which is related to

Hospitality industry

Suggestion

the hospitality industry

the Hospitality industry

. I would like to inform you that I have completed my graduation in the very

first

Linking Words

attempt. And

also

Linking Words

done my internship in Lemontree Amarante Beach Resort Goa.

Then

Linking Words

I started to realise that the

knowledge

Use synonyms

I got from my bachelor degree is not just enough to achieve

higher position

Suggestion

a higher position

higher positions

in my

career

Use synonyms

. So, I thought to look upon different countries with higher quality of

education

Use synonyms

, cost and quality of living, higher regards for credentials and a friendly social culture.

Then

Linking Words

, among many countries, United Kingdom attracted me the most to select it as my future destination for higher

education

Use synonyms

. United Kingdom is known for its quality of

education

Use synonyms

offered by the various reputed universities and colleges.

Also

Linking Words

, It is known fact that

Suggestion

colleges and universities

is frequently featuring

Suggestion

has frequently featured

in the

world

Use synonyms

top ranking generated every year. United Kingdom at present is the most internationalized in terms of higher

education

Use synonyms

. Beside

this

Linking Words

, United Kingdom is a land of multiculturalism, supporting peaceful co-existence of people belonging to various ethnic group from around the

world

Use synonyms

which is a very comforting factor for an international student flying half way around the globe to pursue

this

Linking Words

education

Use synonyms

. .I am certain that my chosen course is right for me and I am sure that having

this

Linking Words

knowledge

Use synonyms

would ensure better opportunities around the

world

Use synonyms

. I will be able to have a successful

career

Use synonyms

in many internationally renowned organizations

Accept space

I am sure that

blend

Suggestion

the blend

of my work experience and credential from a reputed college in

United Kingdom

Suggestion

the United Kingdom

will help me to grab a remarkable position in my professional

career

Use synonyms

.. I hope that

this

Linking Words

statement has reflected upon you the seriousness and the sincerity that I project while writing it. I do understand the high level of commitment of program demands, and I assure you that my determination will not falter. Given my background, my ability, motivation and eagerness to learn and contribute, I hope you will take a

favorable

encouraging or approving or pleasing

favourable

decision regarding my selection of Country and

also

Linking Words

my college. Girish Akula

Wed Oct 23 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

660 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

international cooperation
sovereign rights
Paris Agreement
climate change
ocean pollution
collective measures
economic interests
political will
enforcement issues
free-riders
tailor-made solutions
transboundary pollution
resource constraints
global frameworks
national efforts

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?
The essay discusses about how the plastic items are bad for the environment.
6.5
band
Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days. Why is this? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
One of the most controversial topics in this busy society relates to whether the introduction of fewer working days brings more benefits or not. In this essay, I elaborate on the reasons why a majority of employees believe it with some previous evidence.
4
band
Some countries have become much richer than others. Richer countries should now help poorer countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some argue that wealthier countries should support poor ones. I strongely agree with this idea. I will explain reasons.
<4
band
Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small and local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, many small and local enterprises are bankrupt because of supermarkets' advancement and swift growth. There are several views that the decreasing of hometown businesses brought about a decline in the country's economy. In this essay, I will delve into my reasons why I totally agree with this given statement.
7.5
band
With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?
Since the beginning of the industrial revolution, searching for non-renewable energy supplies has been seriously rising across the world. Some scientists support exploring new regions of the globe to locate more petroleum, while others are against this strategy. I totally disagree with the idea of searching for more of these kinds of power resources. In this essay, I will refer to some studies to explain the dangerous effects of digging for more petroleum.

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days. Why is this? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some countries have become much richer than others. Richer countries should now help poorer countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small and local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?