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Some people believe that politicians are more influential than scientists, whilst others believe that scientists have more influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is perceived by a group of people that political personnel are more powerful than scientific researchers, whereas another group argues
in contrast
 to
this
 notion. I believe that scientists have more worth in a
country
 in comparison with public servants.
This
 essay will discuss both viewpoints with supportive opinion followed by a reasoned conclusion. A developed
country
 is known by several
factors one
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factors, one
 of them is its technological advancement.
In addition
, a hi-tech
country
 is considered world’s most powerful
country
. The key contributor to its technological progress is its scientists. I agree
to
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with
in
 the belief that scientists are
more high
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higher
-ranking as they solely serve to their
country
.
For instance
, USA being a technologically advanced
country
 is able to send its scientists to go to other planets
first
 to the moon and now to
mars
a small reddish planet that is the 4th from the sun and is periodically visible to the naked eye; minerals rich in iron cover its surface and are responsible for its characteristic color
Mars
.
Furthermore
, their scientific experiments about
universe
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the universe
 are introducing many astonishing realities to the whole world.
Although
 parliament members play a significant role in policy making of a
country
 and they are meant to serve as public
servants but
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servants, but
 unfortunately, most of them fail to do so. I contradict with the opinion that politicians are more powerful than scientists as most of them prefer themselves over the
country
.
For example
, in many developing countries like Pakistan, a number of political members are found guilty in corruption cases that directly affect the economy of the
country
. In the end, the impression that politicians have more influence over scientists is not worthy. I believe that scientists serve more than politicians that has made scientists more influential. It is suggested that public servants must be selected on
merits
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the merits
 rather than their powerful background.
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