Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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While many believe that the extinction of certain
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is the greatest threat to our environment, others feel that there are more pressing environmental issues.
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essay discusses both perspectives and why I believe that there are more critical issues than the loss of
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. There are two main reasons why people might believe that the extinction of certain plants and animals is the most serious issue. The
first
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of these concerns the way that plants and
species
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are interrelated and how the loss of one
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can lead to the loss of other
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.
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, if
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the coral
dies many of the fish and marine
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that feed off it
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die.
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, many people note the importance of the biodiversity of the
planet
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and point out that when a
species
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dies
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is reduced.
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biodiversity is important because we are constantly finding that certain
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have important applications
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as in the field of medicine.
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, others consider that there are more serious environmental issues. One of the reasons is that the extinction of a
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can be considered a part of nature.
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, we know that the dinosaurs died out due to naturally changing weather patterns, and
life
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of our
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still continues.
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, man-made problems are
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emerging, such
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as Global warming that are so serious they have potential to wipe out all
life
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on our
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. If the earth continues to experience rising
temperatures it
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temperatures, it
will start to become uninhabitable even for humans. In conclusion, in my
opinion both
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opinion, both
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argument have their merits.
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, it seems that man-made global warming is the most serious problem because it ultimately threatens to not only destroy certain
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species but
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species, but
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destroy all
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on our
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including humans.
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, it seems that we are not taking enough steps to mitigate
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catastrophic problem.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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