The diagram shows the process of making the soft cheese

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the five stages from mixing ingredients to

filterlisation

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fraternisation

in the production of soft

cheese

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Initially

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, it is

a

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vividly apparent that the water and milk

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mixing

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in the mixer

then

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mixture is sent from the cooling

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. Before, adding the salt

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this

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mixture it is cooled at 5*

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for 2

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. In the

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step, the mixture is breakdown through the

fermentated

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fermentation

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at 35 degree

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for 2

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.   In the Fourth Stage, the material is evaporated for 8

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at 300*

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. The steam is allowed to escape throughout the outlet. In the

last

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stage , the material

again

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cooled at 5 *

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for 8

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, the

waste water

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wastewater

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is filtered through the bottom outlet and the soft

cheese

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is collected in the upper filter.

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, it can be incurred that the

process

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of making soft

cheese

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is

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process

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and all stages are essential to make the

cheese

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