The Bar Chart shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport.

The following diagram,
depitcs
show in, or as in, a picture
depicts
the production of
electricty
a physical phenomenon associated with stationary or moving electrons and protons
electricity
by the Ocean Thermal Energy
Onversion
Suggestion
On Version
system, abbreviated OTEC.
First
,
worm
having or producing a comfortable and agreeable degree of heat or imparting or maintaining heat
warm
salt
water
passing through the tubes
are heated
Suggestion
is heated
up using solar energy. Once the
water
enetrs
to come or go into
enters
the evaporation chamber, it reaches its boiling point, become
vapour
and moves upwards, while the
salt
drops downwards.
Second
, the
vapour
passes upwards and initiate the movement of the turbine, which creates energy. The
salt
that was
seperated
being or feeling set or kept apart from others
separated
separate
from the
vapour
in the evacuation room, moves downwards in tubes towards the
dondensation
(psychoanalysis) an unconscious process whereby two ideas or images combine into a single symbol; especially in dreams
condensation
chamber.
Lastly
, the
vapour
is transferred
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
the condensing chamber. There it comes in close contact with cold
seas
Suggestion
sea
sea's
water
running in a circular motion.
This
lead
Suggestion
led
to a decrease in
temperture
the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)
temperature
and the condensation of the
vapour
back to
water
, which is used for drinking purposes. The
salt
a group of things of the same kind that belong together and are so used
set
also
comes in contact with the cold
water
and disperse.
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