In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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It is argued that many people nowadays aren't healthy when compared to people in the 1990s.
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of the main reasons of
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of the main causes of weight
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in people is that there is a huge hike in the number of fast food chains.
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, many restaurants
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as McDonalds, KFC and Popeyes have opened up in recent times, and
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has encouraged people to buy from them due to easy access.
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of my friends,
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to her house, she started buying food from them which eventually made her
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50 pounds in a span of just
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month.
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restaurants have impacted people's health negatively.
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solution for
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issue could be charging higher taxes on
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companies which would eventually shoot prices up and thereby discourage people from buying from them.
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my nearest gym until the workout centre hiked its membership price. For obvious reasons, I quit going there which discouraged me from working out altogether, thereby contributing to my weight
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measure for
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, weight
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in people is more common nowadays due to a peak in the amount of fast food chains and increasing gym membership prices.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • physical activity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • exercise
  • unhealthy diet
  • fast food
  • urbanization
  • modernization
  • stress
  • awareness
  • education
  • government intervention
  • policies
  • promotion
  • sports
  • fitness programs
  • health education
  • taxation
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • parks
  • recreational spaces
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