Write about the following topic: Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Now days people
are believing
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believe
vegetarian is a good for
health
,
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,
however some
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however, some
of the vitamins which are must need to get from
meat
or
fish
only.Some peoples point of view everything got from
vegetables which
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vegetables, which
are needed for
health
.In
this
essay I will discuss
this
view and I will give my opinion. Perhaps the main key
benifit
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
is
avoid
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avoiding
heart stroke
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a heart stroke
,
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,
in
recent surrvey majority
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the recent survey majority
recent survey majority
recent surveys majority
of the
pepole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
had a heart stroke due to heavy fat in blood.
Secondly
, avoid
daigation
the process of decomposing organic matter (as in sewage) by bacteria or by chemical action or heat
digestion
problems because of it has more
calarioes it
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calories, it
calories it
took long time to
diaget
convert food into absorbable substances
digest
and some of the
fish
had
bad smell
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a bad smell
and
also
some time it leads throat infection
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
it has sharp bones we need to eat
nore
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
more
carefully.
However there
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However, there
are some healthy vitamins only got from
meat
or
fish
,
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,
for
example omega
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example, omega
vitamin
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
is very help full for heart
this
vitamin only way we can get from eat
fish
and
aslo
in addition
also
lot
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a lot
of vitamins we got from
sea food
edible fish (broadly including freshwater fish) or shellfish or roe etc
seafood
. In my
opinion we
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opinion, we
should eat both vegetable and non
vegg
edible seeds or roots or stems or leaves or bulbs or tubers or nonsweet fruits of any of numerous herbaceous plant
veg
veggie
these both are having good
helathy
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
protens
any of a large group of nitrogenous organic compounds that are essential constituents of living cells; consist of polymers of amino acids; essential in the diet of animals for growth and for repair of tissues; can be obtained from meat and eggs and milk and legumes
proteins
protons
protein
which are only
specfic
(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique
specific
to that
catogory
a collection of things sharing a common attribute
category
,
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,
For
example some
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example, some
plant
veggetable
edible seeds or roots or stems or leaves or bulbs or tubers or nonsweet fruits of any of numerous herbaceous plant
vegetable
vegetables
which are good for eye
sit
catch sight of; to perceive with the eyes
sight
and
aslo
in addition
also
fiber
a slender and greatly elongated substance capable of being spun into yarn
fibre
we can only get from
tomoto
mildly acid red or yellow pulpy fruit eaten as a vegetable
tomato
,
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,
however
non
vegg
edible seeds or roots or stems or leaves or bulbs or tubers or nonsweet fruits of any of numerous herbaceous plant
veg
veggie
also
give some good healthy vitamin which are
need
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needed
for
health
. In conclusion
,
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,
some people believe avoid
meat
it good for
health
and save
lot
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a lot
lots
of animal and
fishesh
any of various mostly cold-blooded aquatic vertebrates usually having scales and breathing through gills
fishes
by avoiding
eat
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eating
meat but
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meat, but
my
openion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
we should have both for
healthy nation
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a healthy nation
.

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