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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages.

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Studying abroad has become a new trend of our generation who decided to continue their study after the high school, even though the overall cost requirement is quite high. Personally, I feel that
this
 is definitely worth it, and I will explain why.
Firstly
, studying abroad is a great opportunity to perfecting a specific knowledge area, as some countries are known to be an expert at something.
For example
, Japan and Germany are believed to be the best place to study engineering.
Furthermore
, it opens up a possibility to meet people from different kind of culture and background, which will widen our eyes on how we understand people and the world as a whole.
Finally
, as we build ourself a friendship link, we
also
 build a business link that might be useful in the future work life. I do understand the opposing view, which is that those who go overseas is often does not want to come back to their
country
, and prefer staying there to continue their currently develop life. Those things happen quite frequently, especially in the developing
country
, where Their domestic colleges are not as competitive as the others.
As a result
,
this
 kind of act is harming their
country
 of origin, but with a lot of recent scholarship programs that require the applicants to come back to their
country
 after finishing their study are a great compromise for both sides. To conclude, I believe that studying abroad gives a lot of benefits that it is actually outweighed the disadvantages, provided that they will come back and continue to help developing their
country
 of origin.
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