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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. in your letter -Explain why you want to work in company's head office for six months -Say how your work could be done while you are away -Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mr.Singh, I hope you are doing great.I am writing
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 letter about my international association work trip which could enhance my professional and personal prospects. My dream comes true just because of your firm to work outside the country which would enhance my knowledge and fulfil my desire to gain international experience among multicultural colleagues.I will grasp the ideas related to company growth from workers and share my perspectives toward work which would be a significant growth of our company in upcoming years. I manage all my tasks among our team they can handle my all-day duties, I am
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 available for them all the time through virtual meetings if they need any suggestions from my side,
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 team assured me to take care of all workflow in my absence.
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,our team not only focus on day-to-day tasks they
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 take care of our company's upcoming projects under my instructions. I request you put assistance to HR for smooth logistics to assure me
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 visa and accommodation during my all stay period. Looking forward to your affirmative response. Yours faithfully, Amandeep Kaur

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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea to maintain cohesion.
Task Response
Further clarify how working abroad will specifically benefit the company.
Suitable Writing Tone
The tone of the letter is polite and professional, suitable for a request to a manager.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter has a clear logical structure with a proper greeting and closing.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international experience
  • cultural exposure
  • best practices
  • networking opportunities
  • global operations
  • professional growth
  • task delegation
  • virtual meetings
  • responsibility coverage
  • workflow instructions
  • HR arrangements
  • visa application
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural transition
  • smooth transition
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