Many museums charge admission fee while others are free. Do the advantage of charging people to visit a museum outweigh the disadvantage?

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A visit to a museum is
efficent way
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an efficient way
efficient way
inefficient way
to learn their own history and cultural background.
Although
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the majority of
museums
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the museums
charge admission
fee
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from
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for
public, some are free to visit.
This
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essay will discuss why museums should charge
such
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a
fee
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. On the one hand, there are several significant benefits from
enterance
something that provides access (to get in or get out)
entrance
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fee which
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fee, which
is payed by public. Museum's
artifacts
a man-made object taken as a whole
artefacts
represent their cultural heritage and history due to it must be
preserve
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preserved
to
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for
future generations.
In other words
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,
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,
visiting museums
is
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are
great way
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a great way
to learn about their own history so they should have proper professional maintain which is very expensive to
affort
be able to spare or give up
afford
.
Museums
a believer in or follower of Islam
Muslims
can't maintain their
artifacts
a man-made object taken as a whole
artefacts
unless take money from
public
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the public
. Another benefit is
,
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,
thesedays
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these days
grovernment
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governments
government
reduce their funds for museums
as a result
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from it, they need to collect money from society from
this
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kind of method.
On the other hand
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, charging
entrance
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an entrance fee
fee
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has some disadvantages. People may defer to visiting museums. Families, students and poor people don't have ability to
affort
be able to spare or give up
afford
it. If
visiters
go to see a place, as for entertainment
visits
visitors
visitor's
are
drop
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dropping
from exploring museums,
it
it is
it's
hard to
servive
continue to live through hardship or adversity
survive
service
their own.
Student
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A student
The student
can not effort large amount
such
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as
twowenty
denoting a quantity consisting of 20 items or units
twenty
dollers
the basic monetary unit in many countries; equal to 100 cents
dollars
. As long as they charge
reasonable amount
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a reasonable amount
from
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of
public and introduce special discounts for students and low income earners, people can have ability to
affort
be able to spare or give up
afford
this
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fee
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. In
uk
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the UK
UK
,
for example
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,
newly introduced policy
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the newly introduced policy
a newly introduced policy
was introduced to decline budget for museum development and
maintaince
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
maintained
by government. In conclusion,
this
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essay discussed both
,
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,
advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, the benefits of charging
reasonable price
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reasonable prices
a reasonable price
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
drawbacks as discussed earlier on.
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