Many museums charge admission fee while others are free. Do the advantage of charging people to visit a museum outweigh the disadvantage?
A visit to a museum is
efficent way
to learn their own history and cultural background. Suggestion
an efficient way
efficient way
inefficient way
Although
the majority of museums
charge admission Suggestion
the museums
fee
from
public, some are free to visit. Suggestion
for
This
essay will discuss why museums should charge such
a fee
.
On the one hand, there are several significant benefits from enterance
something that provides access (to get in or get out)
entrance
fee which
is payed by public. Museum's Accept comma addition
fee, which
artifacts
represent their cultural heritage and history due to it must be a man-made object taken as a whole
artefacts
preserve
Suggestion
preserved
to
future generations. Suggestion
for
In other words
,
visiting museums Accept space
,
is
Suggestion
are
great way
to learn about their own history so they should have proper professional maintain which is very expensive to Suggestion
a great way
affort
. be able to spare or give up
afford
Museums
can't maintain their a believer in or follower of Islam
Muslims
artifacts
unless take money from a man-made object taken as a whole
artefacts
public
. Another benefit isSuggestion
the public
,
Accept space
,
thesedays
Suggestion
these days
grovernment
reduce their funds for museums Suggestion
governments
government
as a result
from it, they need to collect money from society from this
kind of method.
On the other hand
, charging entrance
Suggestion
an entrance fee
fee
has some disadvantages. People may defer to visiting museums. Families, students and poor people don't have ability to affort
it. If be able to spare or give up
afford
visiters
are go to see a place, as for entertainment
visits
visitors
visitor's
drop
from exploring museums, Suggestion
dropping
it
hard to it is
it's
servive
their own. continue to live through hardship or adversity
survive
service
Student
can not effort large amount Suggestion
A student
The student
such
as twowenty
denoting a quantity consisting of 20 items or units
twenty
dollers
. As long as they charge the basic monetary unit in many countries; equal to 100 cents
dollars
reasonable amount
Suggestion
a reasonable amount
from
public and introduce special discounts for students and low income earners, people can have ability to Suggestion
of
affort
be able to spare or give up
afford
this
fee
. In uk
, Suggestion
the UK
UK
for example
, newly introduced policy
was introduced to decline budget for museum development and Suggestion
the newly introduced policy
a newly introduced policy
maintaince
by government.
In conclusion, activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
maintained
this
essay discussed both ,
advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, the benefits of charging Accept space
,
reasonable price
Suggestion
reasonable prices
a reasonable price
outweight
drawbacks as discussed earlier on.be heavier than
outweigh
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