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Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment.

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In many countries, televised
talent
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 shows are being produced more and more and people have been attracted to these
TV
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 shows, day after day. These kinds of
TV
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 shows have two major aspects like many other businesses. The
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 one is entertaining aspect and the
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 one is sponsoring and
money
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 and talented people are discovered by these two. The entertainment is what viewers expect from a
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 program, in
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 way,
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 shows could make the majority of viewers satisfied while they
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 have found many talented people that they are among celebrities throughout the world.
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, Beyoncé and Britney Spears had come from
talent
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 shows before they become famous. As a matter of fact,
money
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 plays the main role in every business and
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 is a great reason to invest in
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 shows because of benefit and brand promotion.
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, a famous
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 show has 2 billion viewers and it uses talented people to get more viewers and rise its population between its viewers. Certainly, it is the most reliable place to promote and spend
money
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. As I said above, to me, both entertainment and
money
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 serve as a valuable purpose to find talented people who could not demonstrate their abilities, capabilities and gifts to others and perhaps
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 shows help them to become a hero or a successful person in their life.
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