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As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Technology
 inventions are rising rapidly. It's all about helping people and makes human life easier than before. Even though the happening on modern electronic inventions have an impact on our lazing exercise, is it's not so certain that
this
 has damaged users'
health
. For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to blame for
technology
 devices on our lack of doing physical activity. Our
health
 only based on yourself. I must admit that machine's innovations attractive
people
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person
 strongly,
we
of or belonging to us
our
 only interest in it and don't care for taking exercise.
However
, the way we spend less time doing activities because of our laziness but
technology
.
For example
, there
are
Suggestion
is
 a lot of people
on
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in
 the world called programming developers who must work all day long on the computer and
technology
 devices, but many of them still have a strong physical body by taking care their time for doing exercise.
Moreover
, we certainly can't deny the benefits of
technology
 in healthcare. Much of the recent progress we've seen in the medical field is due precisely to technological innovation.
As a result
 of modern innovation, a lot of devices already provide us to monitor our
health
. New technologies have led to better medicines, and better ways we schedule our physical activity.
Consequently
, people live more and
more healthily
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more healthy
. In conclusion, from my
perspective it
Accept comma addition
perspective, it
 is difficult to argue that modern inventions have had a harmful influence on our
health
.
On the other hand
, we need to make sure that we still take a highly attention
of
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by
 doing exercises.

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