you left a jacket behind at a restaurant you went to recently. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter 1) Describe the jacket 2) explain when you visited the restaurant and where you were sitting 3) Say what you want the manager to do.
Dear XYZ,
This
is with regard to my recent visit to your restaurant at Kormangala on the 23rd of November.
During my visit, I left my yellow Columbus jacket
at your establishment. The jacket
has a red inner lining and the sleeves are blue. If it is of any help, my group was sitting at table number 12, near the window.
It was a busy Friday evening and the temperature inside was nice and cozy
so I hung my Change the spelling
cosy
jacket
on the chair itself, however
, while
leaving the place I forgot to pick it up. It was only when I reached home, I realised I had not brought my jacket
.
Request you to kindly look into it. It's quite costly and also
has my prescription medicine in the pockets. Once you have it in your capacity, please let me know and I shall come and pick it up from your restaurant itself
.
Thank you.Correct pronoun usage
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task achievement
Ensure all necessary details, such as the restaurant's name, are included for complete clarity.
coherence cohesion
The sequence of actions (describing the jacket, mentioning the visit, and request) follows a logical order, enhancing readability.
coherence cohesion
Your letter is structured effectively, with clear paragraphs focusing each on one idea or aspect.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is appropriate and polite, which is well-suited to a formal request to the manager.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,