In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after retirement. Discuss why it is so and the outcomes of this situation. Provide specific examples to support your opinion.

In recent years, knowing multiple
language
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is inevitable. There are many
people
believe
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who believe
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that by using
transilation
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translation
applications,
this
can be effectively resolved;
however
, there remain some
diagreements
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disagreements
disagreement
. In my
opinio
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opinion
, I strongly argue that these applications would be better than learning a foreign
language
due to
several reasons. On the one hand, those who point out that artificially designed translators have many problems when
it
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apply
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use
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used
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in
real life
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situations. One of many reasons is that
,
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it may not be able to recognise regional variations, dialects and slags, eventually, communication can be
interrupeted
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interrupted
.
Similarly
,
this
technique is not fully developed to interpret all the
language
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languages
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in the world. Using
this
,
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apply
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requires the internet and technical expertise to handle
this
effectively, but, unfortunately,
this
can not be possible in
the
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apply
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most
part
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parts
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of the world,
due to
lack
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a lack
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of
techinical
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technological
advancement. Despite the
above mentioned
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argument, I still support translating technology. The first and foremost point here is that these devices are more
acurate
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accurate
and faster than humans. In other words, these enable
error free
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error-free
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, speedy communications possible by
this
.
Additionally
,
this
saves time,
otherwise
,
people
require
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are required
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to
spent
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spend
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a great amount of time
to learn
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learning
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a new
language
.
Therefore
, many
people
, especially, tourists prefer
this
technology throughout
thier
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their
journey to
new
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a new
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region
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regions
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where native
people
speak a foreign
languague
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language
. Many other sectors: international trading,
comminications
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communications
communication
,
research
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and research
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institutions
are
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also
benefited
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benefit
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from these, as they can communicate flexibly than
it
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they
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used to be. By way of conclusion, even though
people
have different concepts regarding translation apps, I again reaffirm that, in my viewpoint
this
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is
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the best method to interact with other
people
who speak a different
languege
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language
.
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