In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after retirement. Discuss why it is so and the outcomes of this situation. Provide specific examples to support your opinion.

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own answers.

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In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been proposed that citizens should only consume food and drink products that have been produced in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?