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I have immense pleasure writing the letter of recommendation for Mr. Yirgalem Gidey, who was my student.

I have immense pleasure writing the letter of recommendation for
Mr
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Yirgalem
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 Gidey, who was my
student
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. I know him since 2012 when he was a second-year undergraduate
student
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. As a lecturer in the Department of
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Technology
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 at
Mekelle
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 University –
Mekelle
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 Institute of
Technology
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 (MU- MIT) I was his instructor for the following courses: Object-Oriented Programming with C++, Computer Organization and Architecture, Data Communications, Management
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 Systems, System Administration. He has performed excellently in all the courses, which testifies to his understanding of the fundamentals of
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Technology
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Mr
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Yirgalem
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 was among the top-notch students in all my classes of my teaching experience, I was continually stunned by his analytical and logical reasoning skills always as he was meticulous, adroit, disciplined, dependable and self-confident. He was capable of learning in an open, unbiased and determined manner which makes him a perceptive
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 observed that his accomplishment in designing and implementation of efficient networks and computer systems were of exceptional.
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Yirgalem
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 completed all his
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 projects on or before time, including Centralized Patient History for Hospitals in his mini project
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 his final year project called Network Administrator Tool using Java, which eventually earned him to score a remarkably high grade. He is innately blessed with cordial but impressive communication skills which he effectively puts to use when coordinating and delegating tasks among his project team members. His communication and interpersonal insight are
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 beyond par with astounding character and symbolic leadership skills that have benefited him to meritorious work and produce quality results in any group setup.
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Yirgalem
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 is enriched with many splendid qualities that I would not pass without sharing here. He is a person of discernment, subtlety, dignity, humility, optimism and a compassionate personality filled with an exhilarating spirit. He has constantly strived to raise himself to the level he is currently, and I consider it my duty to encourage him in his search from
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 his graduate studies in his chosen field. He is a dedicated young man of high caliber who can take responsibilities independently and lead it to a qualified completion. His zeal to continue his
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 study and excel in the areas of
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 highly appreciable. I am confident that
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Yirgalem
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 will keep actualizing in his graduate undertakings, and strongly argue that you to consider him as one of the students for your graduate program. He will be an enormous asset to your prestigious university/institute program. If needed, I am at your service to provide
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. Kind regards, Aklil Zenebe (MSc.), Lecturer, Department of
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Technology
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,
Mekelle
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 University -
Mekelle
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 Institute of
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 (www.mitethiopia.edu.et), Phone: +251914419779, Email: [email protected],
Mekelle
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, Tigray, Ethiopia

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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