Too much empasis placed on testing these days. The need to prepare for tests and examination is a restriction on teachers and also exerts unnecessary pressure on young learners. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

Traditional
music
is evolved from the cultural and historical background of a place;
therefore
,
Accept space
,
many consider that
this
has a unique ability to unite people irrespective of their differences.
This
industry, even, in some countries, play as a source of income; the USA, the UK, and China.
This
also
assist to spread culture and heritage background since
this
genre, especially, folklore as a huge number of audiences. In many countries,
for instance
, in India, during the time of the
british
of or relating to or characteristic of Great Britain or its people or culture
British
ruling,
this
brought people together and fought against injustices in the society.
However
, others
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
that
this
cannot be appeal to most of the
music
lovers, due to, its
predictablity
the quality of being predictable
predictability
. Apart from
this
, as
this
music
is specific to any
purticular
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
culture means it does not able to represent the entire country or a
states
Suggestion
state
State
.
Similarly
,
this
music
has not advanced to meet the requirement of the contemporary society. Not only is
this
outdated, buit
this
genre too predictable and no novelty
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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