Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a negative or a positive development?

Due to more accessible and less money spent on computer technology,

majority

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the majority

of people across the world are likely to

work

and

study

at

home

. It has more flaws compared to

advantages

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the advantages

.

This

essay will discuss about the

negetive

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

negatives

development by describing the effects on different age group by working from

home

and

also

their creative thinking as

negetive

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

one. Nowadays, many adults are preferred to

work

from

home

and

majority

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the majority

of

chidrens

a young person of either sex

children

are using computers to

study

as their technology has been increased. It

effects

have an effect upon

affects

different age groups. At

first

the people, who were working from

home

doesnot

Suggestion

does not

posses

have as an attribute, knowledge, or skill

possess

much knowledge compared to the people, who were doing

phisical

involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

physical

activities

in

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at

work

.

Similary

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Similarly

, children don'

t

understand things by using computers. A tutor is required to teach about certain things and it will be easy to understand.

For

instance recently

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instance, recently

a company

has conducted

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conducted

a

compitetion

a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers

competition

to know about the performance of

employes

a worker who is hired to perform a job

employees

. In that it is justified that the person, who is working from

home

has less knowledge

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

the person working in working condition. It

also

effects

have an effect upon

affects

their creative

thinking

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thinking, this

this

effects

have an effect upon

affects

the person physical activity.

Firstly

, the people working from

home

are less creative because they do their

work

to particular limit. They won'

t

try to think beyond the extinct. In the same way

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

, who prefer to

study

through

home

also

don'

t

have knowledge

then

child going to school. They will

also

not try to think beyond their limits.

For example

a friend of mine

preffered

more desirable than another

preferred

prepared

to

study

from

home

and a project is assigned to me and my friend as he

don'

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doesn't know

t

know much about that. His performance was very low compared to me. He is not putting his

phiscal

involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

physical

efforts on the

work

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work, moreover

moreover

he was unable to think. From

this

it is concluded that there are more flaws

on

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in

people who

prefered

more desirable than another

preferred

prefers

to

work

throgh

from beginning to end

through

home

by using computer technology. The

negetives

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negatives

negative

like efficiency and creative level and

also

other

negetive

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

developments are more

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

the positive developments. So, people should put their efforts by working in working

condition but

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condition, but

not through

home

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the home

.