In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case?

The beginning of the 21st century coincided with considerable developments, by which, it was imagined that advanced technology in
agriculture
would overcome our crisis. Yet, in some parts of the world, people are suffering hunger and famine.
This
is because, in my view, the least developed countries rarely have access to common developments.
Besides
, poor
climate
is another reason which has confined
agriculture
and its developments. For these two problems international
fund
can be a practical solution. Many of the
third
-world countries are deprived of conventional developments and farming technology
in particular
due to limited financial resources and weak infrastructure.
Therefore
, in these
countries
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countries'
country's
agriculture
industries suffer a lack of development, not being able to provide sufficient food for their people. Afghanistan is a case in point. In
this
country because of prolonged war technology has never been extended and many of its people experience starvation.
Moreover
, in
this
country
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country's
arid
climate
and large area of
uncultivable
lands are another reason why
agriculture
has not been successful.
Therefore
, since some countries are not powerful in terms of economic or environmental conditions, they
can not
can not
cannot
take advantage of
agriculture
advancement. The possible solution is to constitute an international
fund
. What
this
fund
does is to provide sources from regulatory taxes. For
this
end, some rules need to be adapted for agricultural exporting countries to devote a portion of their profit to
this
fund
.
Therefore
, the outcome of
this
aid can be dedicated to poor nations in order to establish a stable agricultural infrastructure, extending their technologies.
In addition
, some parts of
this
contribution can be intended for extending research on agricultural matters in the direction of overcoming crises and boundaries in
agriculture
such
as poor soil and
climate
. In fact, the more developments in agricultural industries occur, the more money will be investigated in the
fund
.
Consequently
, higher financial aid can be provided to needy countries.
To
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For
illustration, in 2018, the USA benefited from agricultural
product
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production
and food export around 140 billion Dolores while
this
figure is more than
thousand
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a thousand
-fold of all Afghanistan income.
As a result
, a tiny share of USA
income
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income, for
for
instance 1
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instance, 1
percent can eradicate famine in Afghanistan.
Moreover
,
besides
taxes, other supporting finance can come from humanitarian aid. Consider Bill Gates
donation
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donates
which saves millions of African children from starvation every single year. Given what was stated, I believe that
international agricultural
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the international agricultural fund
fund
would be the most effective approach to
tackle
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tackling
starvation and famine in poor nations. To conclude,
this
is undeniable that
agriculture
and farming industries have rapidly developed thanks to advanced technologies,
however due
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however, due
to lack of developments and unsuitable
climate
in some countries, many people still go hungry.
This
problem would be solved if there is an international
fund
with the aim of supporting financial and extending research in the agricultural studies.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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