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Write about the following topic. The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

#topic #internet #access #information #minutes
The advent of the
internet
 has improved our means of accessing
information
. In my view I believe is a positive development because it has helped
student
's in the
research
 field and
also
 helps in improving
quality
life
.
To begin
 with, the
internet
, as to provide so much help
student
 when making educational
research
 with the help of several writes up
that is
 uploaded in various learning sites.
In other words
, it will make easy of their
research
 study when there is prompt access to
information
 required for the study.
For instance
, a study has shown that nowadays it takes a
student
 a lesser period in concluding their
research
, unlike in the past where
information
 is not readily available in soft copy.
Hence
, it has been proven to improve
student
research
 studies. Another point to consider is that the
internet
 has improved the
quality
 of
life
 of people through easy access to prompt
information
. People these days now check the
information
 that relates to their health and well being without going to visit a physician.
For instance
, there is a different application that can be used to monitor heartbeat, sugar level and even cholesterol level which has made
life
 easy for people.
Thus
, the
internet
 has reduced d the rate at which people go to the hospital when compared to a century ago. To conclude, the presence of the
internet
 as help people have
quality
information
 at their fingertips, which have helped students in the
research
 field and
also
 improve the people's
quality
life
 which has indirectly reduced the cost of health care.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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