There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

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Respected Sir, I am writing

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letter to protest against the municipality's decision

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the colony's park to a private builder. I came to know about

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from today's article in your newspaper. My name is Rubina and I am a resident of The Maiden Colony. My family moved here

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its affordability and approximation proximity to the city. I am

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heading the Resident's Council of the Colony. Needless to say, the presence of parks is of the utmost importance in

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densely populated urban area. From maintaining the ecological balance in the environment to providing people with a community area where we can exercise and spend time with our loved ones leisurely, the park has proven to be beneficial to all.

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I am not a lawyer and do not know by which legal process

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land could be sold, as a resident, I was neither informed nor consulted about it. All my neighbours say the same thing. We have petitioned the council, and I hope

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letter reaches a wider public. Our website, SaveLafargePark.com lists a number of protest activities in which we hope your readers may join us. Too few green and tranquil public spaces remain in

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overdeveloped city. Save Lafarge Park before it is too late. Yours sincerely, Rubina Gill

Submitted by msrubinagill on Mon Jan 16 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

affiliation
recreational space
habitat
environmental well-being
community gatherings
tranquility
negative impacts
petition
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